
A chair stands on four legs,
not two (it would topple),
not six (too heavy, too crowded).
Four: graceful and balanced.
Obedient lumber,
bearing their weight.
Mute.
Pushed, dragged, stacked.
But its comfort wasn’t enough.
Humans craved labor.
So they harnessed a horse:
a living engine steaming in the sun,
lean muscle and stentorian breaths,
groomed and geared.
Yet, its flesh grew tired,
the horse’s pain inconvenienced men.
So they built a machine:
pistons for lungs,
steel for bones,
engines for heartbeats—
a restless body with no tears.
But a mother remained:
straining on two legs,
bearing like a chair,
laboring like a horse,
loaded past capacity.
Unmaintained.
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I admire the blocks of meaning that you have arranged. I can easily slip my fingers between each. Opps. I meant my brain can do. Your evaluation runs from chair, lumber, horse, and machine. Each are named by Level 1 Materialism, and since at this stage we expect a chair to really be a chair, we question it not.
But you do.
How?
At the very end you give us the wonder of the biological machine we call Homo sapiens. A bio-bot that strains to withstand the daily sallies of Darwinistic Nobodaddies in order to survive long enough to pump out an offspring to further the line. But, like those Level 1 objects you listed, this female is self-maintained as long as she can still make out where food, water, and shelter exist. This is nothing but my reading of the poem, not a law or anything. The unmaintained author can always enlighten the audience, an audience feeling around in a dark cave for meaning.
Thank you for this gift today.
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Thank you for such an extensive and thoughtful response (longer than the poem itself.)
I really appreciate it.
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No problem at all.
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Very good. Thoughtful.
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Thank you.
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You are very welome
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Beautiful!
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Thank you.
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You’re very welcome.
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